by Georgi Dec 23, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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When u first saw me, i looked in2 your eyes, |
by EoB
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Very good poem, but you should, at least as I see it, write proper English instead of using numbers and such. Not that I care much, but I tend to lose interest in such poems. |
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good poem, but not as good as the other one i read. the rhymes were forced in some places (e.g said and dad) |
by Bredada
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i lioke dz poem is really goood i like ur skills dont 4get 2 comment on mine |
by †Rachelâ€
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thats really good. it means quite a lot because i can reflect into that poem! well done with this!! |
by Incognito
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Ok that was sad, but in all honesty not ur best. Luv ya work anywayz :) |