Broken promise ©

by Georgi   Dec 23, 2004


When u first saw me, i looked in2 your eyes,
unhappiness hadn't started, no pain, no lies.
u saw my tiny hands, a beautiful start,
u made a promise to me then, a promise with your heart.

The next few times u saw me, your little baby girl,
some days u would hate me, some days id be your pearl.
U never held my hand, u never helped me through,
Mummy said this would happen, please it cant be true.

I was older and u saw me, staring eye to eye,
the look that u gave me, the hatred in your tone,
then i knew the difference, my house was not your home.

That promise that u made me, the 1 made with your heart,
as i was lying next to mummy, u said we'd never part.
i actually believed you, believed in what u said,
i put in all my trust, to a man i thought was dad.

The last time u saw me, u looked into my eyes,
unhappiness had filled them, all pain, all lies.
i reached out for your hand, but they were apart,
u broke that promise, u broke MY heart.

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  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    Very good poem, but you should, at least as I see it, write proper English instead of using numbers and such. Not that I care much, but I tend to lose interest in such poems.

    But still great job. Very strong message behind it, and a nice rhyming scheme

  • 19 years ago

    by StormyWeather

    good poem, but not as good as the other one i read. the rhymes were forced in some places (e.g said and dad)

    keep writing
    abbi

  • 19 years ago

    by Bredada

    i lioke dz poem is really goood i like ur skills dont 4get 2 comment on mine

  • 19 years ago

    by †Rachel†

    thats really good. it means quite a lot because i can reflect into that poem! well done with this!!
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Incognito

    Ok that was sad, but in all honesty not ur best. Luv ya work anywayz :)
    -Incognito

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