Ignorant Innocence

by Aken Sol Dec 30, 2004 category : Sadness, depression / other

Torn away by the wind
A petal lifts off from the
Flower it came from

As does the flowers in fall
Nothing can last forever

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19 years ago
by Sean Allen

Nothing can last forever... but some things can last longer than others! o.0

good tanka, but try avoiding "the"s, supposedly you're not supposed to use them in haikus and tankas.
19 years ago
by Lance Hardy

Short but sweet. I liked this because its powerful imagery. Nice job.