I wanna hurt
I wanna cry
I wanna slowly sit here
and watch myself die
I wanna cut
I wanna bleed
I wanna do nothing but screm
I wanna throw up
everything I just ate
I wanna meet my fate
I wanna hurt
I wanna cry
I wanna slowly sit here
and watch myself die
bye bye
i love you all
but i took the greater fall
I cut to deep
threw up too much
now i hurt
now i cry
now i die
goodbye
WITHOUT THIS "I wanna throw up
everything I just ate
I wanna meet my fate"
AND THIS
"threw up too much"
Your poem would be alot better!
But hey my opinion and your poem lol
Keep writing
Kt xx