Look at me

by iwanttobalone   Jan 14, 2005


Look at me.
tell me what you see.
i am not
was not
myself.
one night
one small mistake
ruined it all
i stand here now
and look in the mirror.
who is staring back?
a shadow of my future?
is this girl really me?
have i told too many?
i look and just want to die
i look and wonder why.
my anger welled up
i had to blow off some steam
it meant nothing
i didnt even know him.
wait..
i dont know me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by iwanttobalone

    thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by ~DarkAngel~

    poems dont exactly have to have a ryhme scheme or pattern lol very nice you have great talent this poem says alot

  • 19 years ago

    by iwanttobalone

    uhh.. thanks.. i think
    i wasnt really tryin to have any rhyme scheme or pattern.. i was just tellin it like it was.,

  • 19 years ago

    by BaybeBlew

    This poem is interesting.
    There are 2 sets of lines that rhyme.
    There is no pattern.
    But I like the idea and message behind it.
    Its a start.
    Toodles

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