by »«¤ß詤»« Jan 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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*me and my sister rachele wrote this together its on her profile to* |
by *Sherrie*
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bleak but flawless... |
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Wow that is really something it was really a good poem and honestly I really like it.Thanks 4 giving comment on my work I'll try to make my work much better when you do read mine.:P |
by Conner
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Very good. I give you an honest 4 because it seems you restated some things but the rhyme scheme is awesome and the concept is good. Take care! |
by ** JeNa **
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great pome ur really really talented, hope to read more of ur work soon |
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great poem . . . tell your sis that she did a great job too x x x take care x x x |