Sometimes

by !*!Zoe!*!   Jan 16, 2005


Sometimes I wake up and wonder where you were all my life
Sometimes I think that you were absolutely perfect
Sometimes I love you and other times I hate you,
Sometimes I wish it had been me,
Sometimes I’m glad it was you.
Sometimes I think you’re alive.

~*~*~I wrote this last April I think. I don't know why and I know it's not very good.~*~*~

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  • 19 years ago

    by »«¤ß詤»«

    its ok im sure your other works better but nah it has its own special quality 2 it..... i like it all the same

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    very simple...But so deep...Great work babe !!! Take care,
    E.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    so simple and easy to understand, keep it up, you go girl

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    i can think of many stories that can be depicted with these short lines. it's amazing how poetry can be so enigmatic at times. i really liked this piece. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    No it's really good took me twice to understand it but now I do.. very good job as usual

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