Wreck

by Momentary Relapse   Jan 18, 2005


Glass glittering on the cold pavement
Sparkling in the cold moonlight
Crunching beneath booted feet
They shine despite the dark night

Gleaming fragments dot the ground
Wetly shining glittering red
Ruby drops gleaming dully
Like blood red stones crowning a head

He sits crying a sound of anguish
Sobs racking eyes sliding closed
Breathing heavily nostrils flared
A broken form his body posed

Watching in a daze as they come
The lights blinding his eyes
Spots forming as he watches
This shock numbs him to surprise

Someone comes asks if he’s fine
“Why should I be?” he wants to shout
Instead mumbled something incoherent
Wondering why this came about

He blames himself for what happened
Not understanding this accident at all
A bright light shines on his face
Toward it he tries to crawl

Gently a hand grips his shoulder
A voice tells him to calm down
A man leans in view pushing him back
Telling him not to move around

“What happened?” the man demands
“I don’t know,” he said
He watches as the glass sparkles
Tiny droplets of red

The metal is twisted
Crushed into a crumpled sheet
Black scraped and scratched
And there she sits in the seat

The light of his life
The morning sun
Gone is her laughter
She died so young

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholas Kerst

    Wow...this poem is amazing...i am still amazed by how you can word your verses sometimes...

    He sits crying a sound of anguish
    Sobs racking eyes sliding closed
    Breathing heavily nostrils flared
    A broken form his body posed

    I dont know why but its just awesome...great work

    --S-S--

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    i really love this poem, the imagery was amazing, beautifully written...*5

    Love Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    To: Withney Nichole Mitchell
    Why? For what pupose should I do so? I have no reason to do as you say. It does not matter what you want me to be or do. I care not what you think I should do. If you cannot offer critizism or compliments then do not comment on my poems. I have no time of my own to waste on a pathetcic excuse of a comment such as yours. So do not comment unless you wish to give insightful advice which is highly doubtful.
    ~Deepthroat