That Girl

by Kalika   Jan 20, 2005


Can’t you see the girl that’s crying?
But you don’t notice,
And now she’s dying.
Can’t you see the girl wants to go home?
But no one will help her,
She’s completely alone.
Can’t you see that girl’s in agony?
But you don’t care,
You have no sympathy.
Can’t you see that girls so sad?
But what do you care?
You’re probably glad.
Can’t you see that girl just died?
But now you care,
And now you’ve cried.

(I know it's kind of bad, but comments and votes would still be appreciated)

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    No...it's not bad at all...infact it's good...i think i might be the girl as well except for the last line...don't think anyone will cry for me lol...

  • 19 years ago

    by dragonfly

    I don't think it's bad i can tell that it really meant something to you. I'm sorry about Senna, Jake sounds wonderful.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jaelly Longoria

    ohh by the way thanx for commenting on my poem...

  • 19 years ago

    by Jaelly Longoria

    lol... right now im in pain.. that girl in the poem might be me in my own story... -tear- awesome..

  • 19 years ago

    by Boni

    thanx for commenting on my poems...im here if u need some one to talk to....u seem really sweet email me some time plz

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