Unique

by Jacqui Armstrong   Jan 21, 2005


It is a feeling so unique
Deep inside it makes me weak
I feel so down I feel so low
This pain takes over, begins to grow

I feel outcast and so alone
My heart feels empty and cold like stone
I want to leave I want to go
It slowly all starts to show

I begin to look empty inside
I’ve lost count of the times I cried
People ask me what is wrong
I can’t talk I don’t belong

The pain it grows so far and deep
I lay at night unable to sleep
I close my eyes but all I see,
Is the cause staring back at me

My old best friend is standing there
Staring as if she does not care
Looking as if she wants me dead
So many things that have been said

She was so great she made me whole
And since she’s gone I’ve lost control
And not only that I’ve lost each friend
But in this life I will transcend.

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  • 18 years ago

    by lakitu

    Well done babe, can totally relate to it. Keep ur chin up!!

    Hippie
    XXX

  • 18 years ago

    by lakitu

    Well done babe, can totally relate to it. Keep ur chin up!!

    Hippie
    XXX

  • 18 years ago

    by lakitu

    Well done babe, can totally relate to it. Keep ur chin up!!

    Hippie
    XXX

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    wow all the poems i have read are exellent. I am adding you to my favs list!

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wow that's a very deep poem, I totally relate!!! But I don't think that any one would want you to die....Great poem, very well written, I love it!!!