Hold On (message)

by WhiSperNcUrsIVe   Jan 23, 2005


When you think that life's to hard
Grab on tight
Don't let go
You'll feel better after the fight

I know the world can be cruel
And things don't always go your way
But hold on tight
Don't listen to what those people have to say

They may push you around and want you to cut
But they aren't people that you want around
If they want you to hurt
Don't let them win, don't show them a frown

Because if you let them win
Then they will do it again
And we don't need anyone to hurt
So forget the pain, let the healing begin

You are stronger than what you think
Don't let them get under your skin
Hold on tight, Don't let go
Don't give in

The past is just a door
You forgot to lock
Don't blame your self
For something you forgot

You never meant to do it
It's gone and done
You cant change the past
Look in front of you
And never dare to look back

Okay I cant think of anymore so if you have ideas help me I want this to be a message for people who think that life is over and want to end it! Don't give in!

Brandy 2005 ©

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  • 19 years ago

    by WhiSperNcUrsIVe

    ALI well the bottom is from someone else they were just giving me other things to put in here and i put it in here to see what every thinks...thanks!

  • You did a great job with this poem...I loved it. As always, keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing new work from you...also great job relaying the message in your poem...MuchLoveJJ

  • 19 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    sooo gr8!! loved it!1 hey i have someting u can add:

    the past is just a door
    you forgot to lock
    dont blaim your self
    for something you never did
    or never meant to do
    its done and gone
    you cant change the past
    look infront of you
    and never dare to look back

    sorry if itz too much
    luuuved it!!
    byezzzzzzzzz

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    You are stronger than what you think
    Don't let them get under your skin
    Hold on tight, Don't let go
    Don't give in

    wow i luved tht..keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by WhiSperNcUrsIVe

    wow thanks guys! that means the world to me!