No Stars Tonight

by SweetDreamer   Jan 25, 2005


No stars out tonight,
no twinkle in the sky,
until I see the gleam of morning's light,
a sight such as this makes me realize,
the dark clouds are as blank as my heart,
the spark has vanished from a once vibrant part,
but he who has done this, does not care,
he who has done this, does not feel it's his burden to bear,
maybe it's true that love is possible again,
but what makes it worth trying?
when the chances are more than great,
that he'll too cause some unwanted crying,
but is it bearable being all alone?
listening the sound of your heart's constant moan,
the red of your lips turning blue,
because they would cease to work, since there's no one to kiss,
and the only soul to talk to would be you,
the beats of my heart have become slower,
each time a beat skips there's more pain,
the sparks of a once joyous me, begin to fall like shimmering rain,
there's no stars out tonight...

**Plz, at least vote or comment. I love to see what you think, thx! in my opinion this isn't my best poem, but I still like it.

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  • 14 years ago

    by katie!

    :) well done again, very good, I enjoyed it :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Another good poem I didn't think it was bad at all I like all ur poems that I have read! I can always relate to most everyones love poems. Mostly the sad ones! Keep writing and I will keep reading! Brooke

  • 14 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    good job. keep it up.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    romantic! loved it.....keep writing and u did a very good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by james

    If this isn't your best I'm looking forward to reading some more,what I like most is how descriptive the writing is.

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