Too Soon...

by SweetDreamer   Feb 7, 2005


I will stay strong!
This pain I will not prolong!
I will ignore him for however long,
it'll take for this bittersweet feeling to be forever gone!

but...this kind of love will take time to diminish,
the dance was stopped, before our song got to finish,
his melodies that were his words,
are still ringing sweetly in my ear,
that's the reasoning for my worry,
that I might have given up on our love too soon...

the truth is so hard to admit,
because my boy was truly one of a kind,
he made decisions with his heart, not his mind,
although I had my troubles here and there,
he made sure they were his troubles as well to bear,
that way I would never be really alone,
with that wonderful boy I had finally found my home,

One senseless fight was the cause of our downfall,
I let my insecurities give way to it all,
it's unfortunately taken me this long to see,
that the only one to be blamed was me,
because I had given up on our love too soon...

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  • 14 years ago

    by katie!

    very good poem, emotional :) keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Really liked this poem because u can feel the emotion u put into writing this. Love is always a hard thing to write about most of the time it's sad. At least for me anyways! Keep up the writing enjoy reading ur poems. If u would could u read My Bessing and Meaning for me! Thanx and Take Care!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow! really unique style of writing! very good! really enjoyed it. if you want to check out some of my poems i would really appriciate it! thank you
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    wow, i liked this one a lot. so sweet. very good job, keep writing! u have so much talent!
    SatuzKa

  • 14 years ago

    by lifes big mistake

    blown away!!!!!