OMG RACHEL!! this is such a ssad poem!! it makes me wanna write about when my grabdoarents died...but i dunno how to put it into words...which shows you're a much better writer than me if u can put it in words!!and is this poem u kno sunshine the reason why in ur profile ur name is rachel sunshine? ahah it doesnt matter im just wondering :)

Rachel, A beautiful dedication to your Nanny. Great job. lol

aww...so sorry for the loss yet such a great poem sweetheart!May God Bless
Love Heather

aww! this is soo sad. good job tho!! it was really good! *Kelleye*

Aww thats such a sweet and sad poem, its filled with so much love and feelings, another great one xxx

Hey Rachel, thanks for the comment....this was an excellent poem..not necessarily because you worded things perfectly but because it's real...I can feel it. I lost my grandma in December, and we had a similar relationship...so I know what you mean...You have a load of talent, keep it up. Oh, I also loved "Praying for Life" too but so many people had already commented!

Very Nice

great poem..im sorry about your loss...keep your head up..

your poems are all so good! keep it up! You are an amazing writer! They give me chills they are so awesome....wow LOVE IT!!!!
Love Always,
Angel

That is so sweet. :) I give u a 5.

wonderfull

Great poem.. Keep up the good work.
5 stars for you =)
Please check out my poems...

Hugs

that is so sweet! >5/5<
xxxChristinaxxx

I thought I comment on this already but maybe not I might have just read it. Very well done really sad. Loved it! Keep on writing!

another poem, ur a really great writer, good job!!!

this poem is great. keep ur head up and im sorry about ur nan.
Best Wishes
Paulette

wow.. that's so sad... it made me cry.. awesome.. keep it up!

aww that was soooo cute! Great job.

Nice poem.. very great "RainbowRachel" 5 stars for you ***** please check out my poems =)
Hugs

an excellent tribute to someone who must have been great a beautiful poem worthy of her new abode