A Love Story in Seven Days.

by Saravana Kumar S   Jan 27, 2005


On the first day i saw her,i gave her a cute little smile,
wondering whether she could stay with me for a while,
my eyes seemed to follow her wherever she used to go,
she was no more a stranger whom i saw few moments ago.

On the second day,i asked whether can i be your friend,
she smiled and said,yes if my broken heart u could mend,
we shook our hands and thats when i felt her soft touch,
i never felt like leaving her hand,b'coz i liked it so much.

On the third day,i gave her a gift as it was her Birthday,
opening the gift,for a moment nothing she could say,
she knew that she had a very special place in my heart,but
she did not say anything and that night we remained apart.

On the fourth day kneeling down i said to her "i love you",
she was silent for few seconds wondering what should i do,
looking into her eyes,i knew her love for me was also true,
with a smile she turned and said to me"I Love You Too".

On the Fifth day,we went out on our first date hugging tight,
the candle was lit and everything seemed perfect that night,
looking into our eyes,we were lost in a world of our own,
nothing disturbed us,as in our dreams we were left alone.

On the sixth day,holding a ring i asked "Will you marry me",
she smiled and said,it's with you whom i forever want to be,
the day was chosen,we exchanged our rings and we kissed,
we thanked god all day for giving us what we really missed.

On the seventh day,i asked her "Do you love me still"
with a tear from her eye,she said "I Do and forever i will",
As years went by,we loved one another in all possible ways,
that's how we ended up with this "A Love Story In Seven Days".

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  • 18 years ago

    by Seductive

    ur flow is tight, n also touching

  • 19 years ago

    by Nobia

    neat work!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Aishite Imasu

    Kumar... I don't know how u do it man. Beautiful Job.. Peace
    -Out
    >>>5

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    An excellent poem, Kumar! =) VERY GOOD!!! Keep it up and take care of yourself!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jose Herrera

    This is a beautiful love story I love it, you will go places with your poems where you never thought of dreaming and when you do, stop by a smile. Because god has place a gift where noone can enter. And anytime you open your heart a light you shall see, thanking god for the years of your life. take care