Love Me Tonight

by *~*Soldier Lover*~*   Feb 4, 2005


You leaving is what keeps my loving heart from cheating.
Your love is what keeps my wandering eyes from looking.
Your touch is what keeps my head in the clouds.
You are the wind in my sails.
I would sink without you to hold me tight.
So babe, love me tonight.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    That's great. I love the shortness of your poems, you take very few words to say what you want to say.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    That was really good, although you could have added more to it. But its still good.

  • 19 years ago

    by bluehun

    hi you left a message on one of my poems"Rachel at 2005-02-03

    back off da gurlz find your own rhyme,
    cuz you just playin and aint worth my time. "you see im a boy,and scottish,can u explain what you mean thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Great job! You have a lot of talent in writing good poetry. Keep up the great work & thanks for your comments on my poetry. I hope to read more of yours soon!
    -Kate
    P.S. If there's anything else you want me to comment on, just let me know.

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