Feel

by Mandy   Feb 6, 2005


I don't know what to say
We used to talk each and every day
Now I want to break down and cry
Should I say I don't care and lie?

I try to say what I feel
because I love you so much it doesn't feel real
but I'm scared you'll get up and run away
if you'd know I'd give up anything just to be with you one day

I'm locked up in the prison of my mind
because thoughts of me and you just play and rewind

-sarge.. RATE and COMMENT PLEASEEEE!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amber

    I gave it a 5 as well, you DO have talent..keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by nickie

    This is a very good poem...you have a great talent! Keep up the good work! I give it a 5! Loved it!

    Love
    Nickie

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy

    thats my favorite part also. thanks for all the comments ! <3

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    girl you have some mad skills. ;)
    i loved this part "I'm locked up in the prison of my mind
    because thoughts of me and you just play and rewind" so tru and how i feel.
    5/5
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by JoSeLiNe

    I feel the same way about a guy i like anyway good job on your poem im gonna put you in my favs. cool wit you