Over His Love

by Mandy   Feb 6, 2005


She walks over to the window, face drawn tight
She quickly glances out into the light
She puts one hand on the glass, one hand tries to break her fall
She hates to see the man she just saw

She slowly gets back up and moves to the door
She looks out again because she knows this man won\'t break her anymore
The look she gives just tells it all
Shes over him but her hearts still raw

hey rate and comment please! this is the first ive written of this style so be nice

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  • 20 years ago

    by chelsea

    Hey this is really good i've felt this a time before....please read and comment mine if you would like..
    ~chelsea~

  • 20 years ago

    by Amber

    nice?..I'm always nice..*cough cough*

    lol,n-e-w-z nice poem...for your first time writting it in that style it pretty good!!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by x!*Just wanna be loved*!x

    hey thanx for commentin on my poems, i read sum of urs and they're really gud keep at it!

  • 20 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    i like this one too. you have talent gurl.
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 20 years ago

    by Bizarre

    it unique but very very good. great job.

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