This girl

by Mandy   Feb 17, 2005


She doesn't know life without you
Why can't you just love her too?
Her fist hits the door
She just can't take it anymore

She falls down into a heap
and wishes she wasn't in so deep
She talks, but you have nothing to say
Even after she's cried day after day

Seeing this girl makes me sad
Watching her lose everything shes ever had
Why can't you care? Why can't you see?
That this girl is me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    This poem is awwwwwesome!! i love it!! you're a verrry good writer. If you had a book. I WOULD BUY IT!! EVEN IF IT WAS $50!! You're awesome!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel Sanctuary ©

    This is rather sad... Excellent work again tho.. You're pretty good.. lol If that's not an understantment I don't know what is.. ^^ Keep up the great work.. Take Care
    Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley

    mandy that poem was awesome i love u !!

  • 19 years ago

    by HunnyBun

    cute. sad. but cute.

  • 19 years ago

    by April

    mandy i like your poem this one is the one i like most it is very good and i know the one i wrote and you read if something happened to you wasn't that good and i have better ones so maybe if you get time you can read those

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