These scars don't dull

by Austin   Feb 8, 2005


These scars dont lie
They don't tell a myth
The thing that caused them
Is as real as my breathe
Or at least the breathe I had
Since you took it from me
As you strangled me with words
And cut my with your actions
And these scars still show
They haven't dulled with time
They keep showing the pain
You wished upon me
As for the bleeding
The ground still crimson
My room splashed with red
And dulled with black
To represent the blood and bruises
I wish you would just go away
And you would to
I don't want you in my dreams
You've caused to many tears
Too much blood
Too much pain
These scars haven't dulled

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Loved ur poem I like poems that show so much feeling! Exellent! Check out some of mine if u would please! Thanx

  • 19 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    I love in this one how you talk about your scars, your pain. I'm feeling it. 3>jess

  • 19 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    this is really good i liked it. CHeck out some of mine if you want sometime!
    Love Always,
    Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by oOXkonnXOo

    thats a wonderful poem! its filled with emotion and it flows so beautifully! keep up the great work!!

    -jenn

  • 19 years ago

    by Rozzy

    wow thats really good.i really like it.did you think it out just let yourself go?anyway thats really good keep writin...