wow ..i was like imagining a tune while i read it...it's beautiful...i can relate to it lots....a feeling of utter misery in my heart...keep writing

Great poem, i happened to see it because i just wrote a poem i put in the dark section and it starts in the page with the top poems so i decided to read yours and im glad i did. its a great poem...(",)

..::â–‘Christinaâ–‘::..

i liked it, keep writing...

oo wow!! that was great!! keep it up!! :)

Nice song hun 5/5

I really loved it!
It was beautiful and full of so many feelings but it also had a touch of darkness to it that really made the poem
wonderful!

~*LorienElf*~

This is a realy sad poem, it is realy well written nice one!

it is me. great poem, really.

hey that was really good.i have felt like that many days im not sure if you write stuff just for fun but that kinda tied to my life i liked it allot/........melissa 14 f wa

hey great poem i loved it!!!!! so full of feeling and it flows really well!!!!!!!!! excellent poem! >>5/5<<
bec xXx

Wow. Leaves me speechless. lol. REALLY good poem. I'm starting to like this category of poetry but I don't know if I can write any poems for it. Anyways, awesome job. Keep up the great work! Take care!
-Conner

That was really great. It really shows ones person feels. Great work!!!=) 5/5

Amazing work, beautifully written. The longer chorus/verse is truely brilliant. Brilliantly phrased, brilliant words, brilliant message, brilliant Idea. I LOVE it.
Well done, great write.
Take care of yourself,
All my love,
Laura.

Huh, that was good. Five.

I like it.

loved it

hey i love this this poem keep up the good work!thanx for you comment.!mel

Thanks for the comment on my poem.

I liked this poem because it had a good repetition. I love repetition. I think it's the real basis of a great poem.

I've been wanting to write something like that, because I've been feeling that way. Pretty shitty..I hadn't been able to but looks like u were. I wanted to do the same thing with the rain and all. I guess that's one reason I love this one so much.

Hum. that was strong, and made me think and consider about being in the place of other people, people who are suffering.

Nice write.

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