How many times...

by Sarah-Louise   Feb 12, 2005


How many times have I looked in your eyes,
And got weak at the knees and sored through the skies.
How many times have I tasted your kiss,
And gone tingly all over with a feeling of bliss.
How many times have I held on to your hand,
And my heart's started beating without my command.
How many times have I heard your sweet voice,
And lit up with a smile but it's not my choice.
How many times have I missed you beside me,
And even though your in my heart felt terribly lonely.

But only once have I fallen in love,
With this magical person that I'm thinking of,
I couldn't survive without you in my heart,
I love you my baby,and I have from the start.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    So pretty. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    wow anoter great poem.

    How many times have I held on to your hand,
    And my heart's started beating without my command.

    i liked that part. u have talent inabundance and i look forward to reading more of ur poems.

    take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    wow, amazing poem. well done

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Woah, amazing poem hun. It really is. I don't really see anything wrong with this at all. The phrasing is perfect. Thinking about it afterwards, kind of brings tears to your eyes. I'm not sure whether this is how you're feeling now or how you have felt, either way, you've portrayed it amazingly.
    Flawless.
    Take care of yourself.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    That was really something. Thas was truly great you really hit the spot. great work!!!=)

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