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by ··¤(`×[¤Ðívïñë Ðî§tørtîøñ¤]×´)¤··   Feb 16, 2005


(the title of this poem makes my name seem redundant...)

Behind closed doors,
I draw the blade.
Another crimson swelling,
In a silent masquerade.
No words are ever spoken,
They would only dull the pain.
So I’m comforted by the bleeding,
And the falling of the rain.
Slowly I take my razor,
And plunge it into the red,
I paint my angry verses,
From the blood that I have bled.
I etch it on my walls,
Of the closet in my room.
I just can’t seem to stop,
But I don’t want this over soon.
I do not desire help,
Or sympathy in any way,
It is simply an expression,
The red consumes the grey.
I know that it is wrong,
To be addicted to this sin.
But I need it to stay breathing or,
Suicidal thoughts fade in.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kristal Sowiecki

    wow i like this. its really good.

  • 19 years ago

    by Elynnka

    even if it is about cutting, i must agree with the author: "its just that the only ones that i feel are any good are the ones that i write out of anger, or another strong emotion..." :)

    again i like your poem:)...all of them are good:D...5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ··¤(`×[¤Ðívïñë Ðî§tørtîøñ¤]×´)¤··

    Caleb,

    its not exactly that i'm trying to gain attention by posting these poems, i have written quite a few... its just that the only ones that i feel are any good are the ones that i write out of anger, or another strong emotion... I guess i should take the time to type up one of my happier LOVE poems, huh?

    -rissy

  • 19 years ago

    by Caleb

    Pretty good for such a cliche subject as cutting is. My only recommendation is to stop writing about cutting. If you are truly cutting for a valid reason, keep it to yourself. When I see poems or quotes like this, I think how stupid people actually sound telling everyone (no offense to you). If it were a cry out for help or something reasonable, I'd understand but when you just write about it so people will know (or to oddly be accepted or noticed) it's just pointless.

    Pardon my annoyance. The poem itself is good.

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