this is really good! I liked it a lot..keep writing you're really great at it!!!! Check out some of mine if you want to!!!
Love Always
Angel

wow thats a great poem, u really have talent, great job!!

Great poem. I can relate to this a lot! Keep it up!

Love,
Tiff

Wow, I loved it. So sad too. Great job, it was wonderfully written. 5/5

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wow i loved it, it was sad but so imaginative and well written, thanks for commenting on mine xxx

I don't usually like suicide poems but this one was somewhat different. I liked the way you described it, as drawing, not once did you say " i cut myself" or " i dug the knife in deep" which i've seen in just about every other suicide poem. Instead you used other descriptions which told the story with out sounding too cliche. Well done with the originality. Thanks for shairng.

My god your a great writer, I love your poems they are great. Keep writing, if you have time check out mine, Take care xx

Ahhhh! Such passion lol I love it! 5/5 indeed! You have great talent! keep it up!

Wow! This is a poem written with such talent. I loved it. So great. 5/5

excellent poem!

wonderful metaphor, it wasnt as gross and blunt as most suicide poems, very very great writting, keep it up!

scarlet rivers dance across my drawings
and sweep upon the floor
all goes black
as i lay my head in the delicate hands of an angel
my pain is no longer with me
it is now in those whom i have left behind..
AMAZING STANZA

WOW !! I LOVE THIS POEM:)

WOW, THAT WAS GREAT...
I GIVE YOU A 5/5
MUCH LOVE
~*~HEATHER~*~

awesome poem!
--Much Clown Love--
Dayna

Very good! Kind of sad though.

wow that poem gos deep and yet you never mentioned what she was really doing yet we could tell you have a great mind for poems i hope i can read more in the futurexx

i've read this one before and i think i commented too...but this is still very good so it deserves another one!

This is a great poem... you hit this one all the way home...great work hunn...xox Sherrie

Wow!! What a..creative poem..and sad:'( I really liked how you wrote this..so amazing! I hope you dont do this :'(! I can see you have much talent! Keep your chin up!
Thanks for sharing
-Shannon-

Hey if it's true don't feel alone, cuz i do it. Mostly cuz of stupid boys. I gave you a five, I think that was so great. I haven't been on here that long so i haven't got my suicidal ones on here yet, lol. Don't take offense please cuz i know how you feel, and i hate it when people say that, but i belive i kno wat ur going through.