Wow, that was so good, I really relate to it, keep on writing

Wow.. that was written so well. But, that's so sad. :'( Good job though. Take care! <3

Sad but great write. I hate to hear that this happened to you yesterday. I hope you realize this can be very dangerous and I hope you can overcome hurting yourself like this. It don't take the pain away it only gives you more. I'm just concerned for your well being. Call me a friend. Take Care, Love ya bunches, Ann

Thats an amzing poem and quitesad how you gave in cos it takes such strangth to stop. Good luck!

I love it, including the rhyming scheme. Very nice, but yet so sad. I'm sorry you feel that way. Hold your head up high and keep writing!

Very good. Beautiful. I am sorry that you give in, I hope that you can be stronger in the future, I hope things get better. Take care and keep it up xxx

wow your really good at dark poems..actually your good at almost all categorys of poems..anyways thanks for the comment, I hope to read more of your stuff

Unloved ♥

o.O hey! thx for commenting mine... and nice poem!

wow... this is beyond words. it's beautiful, amazing, excellent. im really sorry you gave in. i really hope everything's turns out for the best :)
ur an incredible writer, can't wait to read more!
Fighter
-xXx-

Beginning was weird, hard to understand, but the rest of the poem more than made up for it... great job

wow, I'm sooo sorry that's happened to you :( :( I can definetly relate, your words are so beautiful... they leave me speechless, and takes away my breath. Stay safe hun, :) Take care x x x x

This is a good poem, this is how i used to be at one time and i am honestly thinking on going back to that way. I can't really tell you to stop for i am just a person on the internet...but sometimes that 'pleasure' can be replaced with another one...trust me...i know, i was a cutter...enjoyed and loved pain.

Anyways, the poem was great i loved it, it didn't rhythem but it was a great poem, especially this stanza.

Steam tries to blur my reflection.
I try to hold my tears while they sting.
My eyes become flush along with my complexion.
Oh, how I desire to fly even on one wing!

Such a great Metaphore...i loved it. Keep your chin up

Five/Five

P.S. Thank you for your comment on my poem...if you continue to comment on mine i will continue to do so on yours.

hey hunnie.....
i know your going through a rough time right now, but just remember that we all love you and what you write..... and that is the absolute truth...... I LOVE YOU
5/5
jescelle

Compared to your fist poem (abandoned) I can see how far you have come along.

I am not a fan of self harm poems, but this one reached me.

Keep writing.

Bert

~ beautiful write, good job
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Wow, heart wrenching. I wish I could stop you from causing such harm to yourself. Look at how beautiful/talented you are WOW...but this poem is so well written-5
and thank you for all of the comments!

Love Heather.

i wish you would write more...until then you've gained a spot on my faves! much love,Heather

great poem! i love it! but that's so sad! even though this really was beautifully written! i'm glad that you put this poem on here because this really did tell a great story! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

wow u seem really talented i really enjoyed this! and ive continued on black tears if u would like to take a look >>5/5<<
bec xXx

Definetly a wonderful piece.. The words were perfectly placed and well thought of.. Keep writing and thanks for your comments..

*> PainOfOne