Little Sister (new ending)

A lost soul from a bad example
Down the path to corruption,
I watch you...
In silence.

There are so many similarities,
I know who you are
I know exactly who you are becoming,
But I just watch.

The tears you haven't cried yet,
Cuts that haven't shown through,
The many mistakes along your path,
In silence, I warn you.

Suicidal talks,
At such a young age.
Words of rage now,
But actions to come.
I feel your emotions, its a shame,
But I just stare...
Its deja-vu.
I see who you are,
Who you will be.

You're following blood without even knowing.

Following the path I left for you,
The ripples cease, the reflection appears.
Growing up, you're exactly who I was
Becoming what I am.

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Any critique on this poem will help. I want to send it in for a contest,s o I need all the advise available. Thank you!