wow...i love it...the emotion is so real and relating...amazing work katie! and thank you for commenting on my poems it really means alot and it makes me want to keep writing...:)

wow!! that was really good! i loved it!! very emotional and very detailed!! keep it up!! and stay strong!! takce care!! :)

Good descriptions, great poem

I loved it! So sad , but an awesome poem. 5/5 definatly. Keep writing!

Awesome job! The wait is worth the while in this one. I love all the emotion. Keep up the great work! Take care!
-Conner

Hey thanks for the comment on my poem this is a really good i can totally relate i once collasped in a loo from losing to much blood but luckily i survived! ne way your a really good writer take care xxxxx

awesome poem ...its really long ..but thats good ...i gave it a 5 ...it was very intense yanno ..i liked it

Im speechless, this is the best poem you have written so far.....Its so full of emotions!! I REALLY really love it!! It reminds me of my poem "Suiside Pills"!!! You are one of the best writers in here and you are so much like me.....Im here for you and I can relate to your poems!!

I really like this poem alot

this a very powerful poem. the beginning is a little confusing but the end is beautiful, good job!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

I've been clinicly dead befor, it hurts, watching all the pain and suffering. death isnt a funny thing, and this is a well worded poem,you get a 4, keep writting.

-Lance,

yes a very descriptive dark poem nice flow

Wow that was really long and descriptive. It was good but don't mind me being honest but by like the end since it was so long the rhyming almost got a little...I don't know the word but it almost got kinda old. I just think it's cuz it was so long.

It was a great poem though, I especially loved:

"Soaring through a blackened hole
Demons eating at my soul"

"It begins to play a story
Long, unwinding, very gory"

Those were great lines. Keep up the good work.

This is an amazing poem and you are a really talented writer. keep it up love Emma xxx ps. WOW

wow, this is an amzing poem, i hope its not true but if it is i hope ur getting better, u hav so much talent xxxx

wow that was a really great poem, ur truly talented, great job!!

Very long but with good detail. I don't know the feeling but I know the feeling of depression. U write ur poems with great detail and I enjoy reading them. I have already read some of them more than once. Talent girl!

Your poems are so deep. well done agen for like the seventh times :) lol

This is really good, deep... I like your style...
Xox Sherrie

Beutifully written
What else can i say..
;)