Comments : The tears that fall so silently

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow, I really liked reading it, it flowed really smoothly and there werent lots of pointless lines keep it up your a really good writer

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    i really like this and can relate but your so much better at putting it into words nice work 5/5!
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    incredibly sad, very powerful, i liked it. 5/5
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    could you please check out 'Lost' or 'Addicted' please? thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    wow, that was a good poem! i liked the format that you used, very good writing, i loved it!
    thanks for your comments i appreciate them ;)
    take care xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    i really enjoyed this poem great work... you are very talented... sometimes i think just like this poem... dont you wish one day you would wake up and all the pain woulld just dissapear... anyhow great work hun..xox Sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    awsome poem, very well written!! I totally relate, keep writing!!! Thanks for your comment, read more of my poems if you would....I will be back and read more of your poem and add you to my favorites!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    this is really good...I liked it alot. In a post i said i'd read your poems...I would read more but I've already commented on a lot of them! This is one of the only ones I haven't read. I don't want you to think I'm ignoring you! haha...You have some Talent. Keep it up!
    Love Always,
    Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    I love this it was so heartfelt and flowed realy smoothly greatjob

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    great poem, very deep..dont let anyone put you down...keep up your great work!! :) take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Ur poems are very good! Thanx for reading mine!

  • 19 years ago

    by Tigger

    Amazing writing, Verry powerfull i liked it ! :D Keep it up, hope to be reading more

    Tigger Thx for the comment on my poem :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    I liked the poem itself. The only critism I can offer is to try to set a rhyme scheme and then things will flow better. Nice job though.

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    like it. its wonderful

  • 19 years ago

    by lifes big mistake

    this is a really good poem i esp liked the bit

    I try to smile, to be so happy
    Yet deep inside my soul is dying

    can really relate to it keep it up!!

    lilykit
    feel free 2 check out mine x

  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    hey, I loved your poem. I know how you feel, and I hope you get happier soon. You're a wonderful writer, and I hope you write more.

    Come read my poems sometime!

    -Michelle

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow! This is an amazing poem and shows the full amount of emotion. All my love Emma xxx 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by PinkLaces

    Incredible Poem.
    I Enjoyed Reading it,
    I Hope This Isn't True Though.
    Thanks For Sharing.

    Failed

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Wow, this poem is great! I can relate to a lot of it. Keep it up hun!

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 19 years ago

    by Fireflower

    wow, that was an awesome poem gurl. lots of emotion. just the way i like it! exelent work! keep it up!

    vedali

  • 19 years ago

    by Misstress

    I honestly like this one..
    The emotions are real..
    Keep on writing.
    ;)