I know who i am

by Rashelle   Feb 28, 2005


What you see
Is what you get.
I'm just me.
I don't pretend.
I don't play a role.
I don't try to blend.
I know I'm not perfect.
Thats for sure.
But for that there is no cure.
I may not be beautiful.
But beauty is in eye of beholder right?
And theres more to me
then what you see from sight.
Sometimes I'm moody.
Sometimes i can be too nice.
But everything about me doesn't have to be precise.
Sometimes i try to hide
From what i really feel.
But at least i know that the feelings are all real.
I may not have the most friends
But there definitely the best.
And for them i would go to all ends.
I sometimes cry.
Always try to laugh.
And I'm really not that sly.
I love mac and cheese.
And i hate ham.
But one thing is certain about me...
I know who i am

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  • 18 years ago

    by Christa

    I agree with Gandalf about how your poem flows, it's kind of choppy, but the message is great. I love that you have pride in who you are, even within all your imperfections. I also really liked the last couple lines, the ending of a poem determines how the poem is received. Your ending was beautiful. Keep up the good work!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Lol...very cute poem and omg i love mac and cheese too...lol i wrote a poem about it:) anyway great poem...it is wonderful that you know who you are!!! luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 19 years ago

    by James

    Beautiful poem :)

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    heyy i love the ending
    very nive work
    keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    this was another great poem, you're a good writer....I like how you made this poem your own, you can really see you put yourself into it....take care girl...
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

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