Kalah,

great poem, full of anger and sadness! wonderful -5

God bless
Heather.

Aww! This sooooo sad...I loved the poem thought very emotional..Beautiful!

Chris

Great poem, lotta feeling in there

It really peaks to my heart, I cant describe it with words!!! I have been through the same, so I can relate to what you are saying!! Wish you the best!

amazing poem!

great poem! i love it, keep on writing, PLP

~lil slam~ :-*

Very nicely done. Keep up all your good work sweetie!
xox-A

wow i feel the same way. You are suck an amazing poet. keep it up. you're awesome hunn
alyssa

Really good!

What an awesome poem!!!! I love it! Please vote and comment on mine!

~*~wow, powerful poem..keep up the good writing~*~

Wow that was really powerful theres alot of emotion. Great poem I know whats it like to have so much hate for your dad. 5* Keep your head up.
Much Luv, Amanda
check out some of my poems plz I like to know that you think of them. and if you ever need to talk or get your anger out Im alway here.
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this wus a very angry sad powerful poem.. i for one hate my father also and somewhat know how you feel. Your such a great writer! keep up your awsome writing 5/5
xoxoxo
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