When fears caught me

by Boy   Mar 5, 2005


When i go outside when i see the bright sun i want to praise God and save words in my copy but i am afraid before save i die

moon and stars shine so bright and the moonlight make me realize to praise you God as i praise in words i am afraid before save on paper i may die

when i see all the beauty of nature
i want to save in my paper to my pen as i write on the paper i am afraid before describes i die

when i see long buildings with many windows and i walk slowly and when i see tall trees

where birds look like so little on the sky i want to explain and praise you and during writing these all things on my paper i am afraid i die

as i walk and go far from the city in the green fields when cool breez touches my body i feel so glad

i want to save that feelings in my copy but when fears caught me i am affraid before save i may die

you made this world very beautiful. Mountains rivers, made me realize that i write something in your praise
but again i am afraid before praise i die

there is so much beauty and you made her so much beautiful
my love when i see at her eyes i see different world which belongs to my heart i want to praise my love but i am afraid before this i die

i look at her i am afraid before hold her in my arms before find her i may die and thus i will unable to get the passion of love and its experience

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  • 7 years ago

    by Jessica

    Beautifully Pieced Together.. Loved It (:
    -Jessi

  • 10 years ago

    by Gizmo

    When i go outside, when i see the bright sun,i want to praise God and save words in my copy but i am afraid before 'I'M' saveD i die

    THE moon and stars shine so bright and the moonlight makeS me realize to praise you God as i praise in words, i am afraid before I'M save on paper i may die

    When i see all the beauty of nature,
    i want to save in my paper to my pen as i write on the paper i am afraid before I describe, i die

    when i see long buildings, with many windows, i walk slowly and when i see tall trees

    where birds look so little on the sky i want to explain and praise you and during writing these all things, on my paper i am afraid i MAY die

    as i walk and go far from the city in the green fields wheRE THE cool breezE touches my body, i feel so glad

    i want to save THESE feelings in my copy but when fear caTCHES me i am afraid before I AM saveD i may die

    you made this world very beautiful. Mountains rivers, made me realize that i write something in your praise
    but again i am afraid before praise i MAY die

    there is so much beauty and you made her so much beautiful,
    my love when i see her eyes i see A different world which belongs to my heart, i want to praise my love but i am afraid before this i MAY die

    i look at her, i am afraid before I hold her in my arms before I find her i may die and thus i will BE unable to get the passion of love and its experience.

    THIS IS AN UNUALS POEM..I AM NOT RELIGIOUS.BUT EVERYONE TO THERE OWN. I HOPE THESE CHANGES ARE HELPING YOU.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wonderful! The beauty in the world that you have descibed comes from the heart. Now you have not only saved your praises, but shared them with the world. Take Care Cindy

  • 12 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very beautifully done

  • 14 years ago

    by Boy

    thanks amit. but i dont believe in love now