Comments : On my bedroom floor

  • 19 years ago

    by Kiersten Nicole

    love it, wow. what a wonderful poem, i really love it!!
    -K

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    wow a brilliant poem, I loved it!!! I totally relate to what you are saying, keep up the good work!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow so intense exellent job I can feel the hurt when reading this poem. Loved it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! amazing poem! very catching and well written! i hope that you are okay, by reading this poem its kinda obvious your not but i hope you'll feel better. *hugs*

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    wow, this is an awesome poem. very very good. i understand what you're saying. this is just an awesome poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Hoover

    Good Poem!!! I can relate 100%,
    keep up the good work!
    *5/5*

  • 19 years ago

    by Kailynn Makenna

    Hey awesome poem!! i reallyyy liked it..you have a lot of talent..great job..im sorry your feeling this way..i hope everything works out..

    xX-Katherine-Xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    If this poem is really about you remember that He hear's what you're saying! Keep your head up!! Awesome poem!!! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Thank you all for your concern, but this poem is not specifically about me. I have felt like this at times yes, but it is not about me personally. I am not a teenager. I am 24 years old as well..not 14. :) Thank you all for your kind words and comments though.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashlynn

    Kool poem. I like it.
    Thank you for voting and messaging me on my poems. I feel so loved lol.
    Check me out
    ~~(~~Morana ~~)~~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    sorry to be anti christ here, but in my opinion, god doesn't help anybody. but if that is what you beleive, than keep faith and eventually he will save you from your peryl and your life will get better. life cant be crap forever. evetually it has to bounce back up.
    ~Freak~

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I don't see why your poems aren't rated higher than they are. You seem to be able to make anything and everything work in your poems...I really admire your gift. Keep writing these touching poems and sharing, please :)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by rachyBBY

    Thats a very good poem, you're such a great writer. one day maybe you should get a book published ? im sure it would sell good. but i really liked ur poem =]] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    I don't believe in god but it was a very good poem.