Brought tears to my eyes! Lovely.... 5/5 Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

I don't see where its spelled with any thing other than 1 o

i feel sad, and hollow.
i guess goodbyes are made that way.
sigh..
oh well,the poem is so swift.
very nice..

wow....beautiful and so so sad, I got tears in my eyes now =0(....Hey i can see that you are from Norway, well greadings from Denmark from me to you =0) great poem!!!

wow! utterly amazing, the visualisations, the emotions, the love ...you are an excellent poet! id really appreciate your talent to comment of some of my work
Brillaint!
xxxLoUxxx

really nice poem...you might want to add some adjectives here and there..to portray your feeling better...take a 5! good work
cheers

wow.... what an incredible poem. I can feel how sad it is but how overwhelming powerful the love is as well.... -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Honestly, that was one of the best, and most touching poem I have ever read....it blew me away.....amazing!!

Kalika

i love this poem!! it was great!! every word fit perfectly with each other. it had a nice flow!! it was...GREAT!! keep it up!! :)

This poem is real nice take a five and when ever you have a chance read one of mine i know how you feel that people give you a low score without leaving any comments it is pretty gay ... haha

A tragic love tale. Nonetheless beautifully written with superb and flawless imagery. Sounds a bit Shakespearean (that's a compliment). Very proffessional with extra bits that just make this poem memorable.
It was a vivid and excelent read; 5/5 from me!

Beautiful and sad. I loved it. It had a very intriguing story it told, and i liked the way it was woven into a poem. Very very beautiful, keep on writing and take care.
SatuzKa
p.s Pratar du norska? Jag pratar svenska men jag förstår norska ochså. Ha det bra!

Prater Norsk ja. Født og oppvokst der=) Hvor er du fra? Sverige?

its really good. git the talent

'Alone I listen to the waves
sighing upon this shore.
A soul like her's won't live again
in Norway forevermore.'

This was my favourite part!
excellent poem, 5/5

excellent form passinate poem

I enjoyed it, thank you for shairing

The poem 'had enough' was written whilst in a bad mood and very drunk. lol! By the way very good poem

its nice.i like it

Very nicely done. 5/5. Flows nice.

Great poem again. I love your choice of wording. It's such a sad poem... great job 5/5

~ Tina