Last Night I Saw a Shooting Star

by !*!Zoe!*!   Mar 15, 2005


Last night I saw a shooting star,
Right outside my window,
I felt like I should make a wish,
Whilst lying on my pillow.

Star light, star bright, upon this star I wish tonight,
I wish for just only one day,
Where everyone’s pain would go away.
I wish for a lovable boy of mine,
Who treats me right, and won’t be a swine.
I wish for an end to my depression sprees,
And for my temper just to freeze.
I wish for friends both new and old
And in my mind, they’re made of gold.
I wish for the classic “pure world peace”
And for all the fighting just to cease.
I wish for everyone who is a victim,
To pull there head up and stick out their chin.
I wish for me to really be loved,
And for our hearts to fit like a glove.
I wish to forget a certain night
When I found out I wasn’t alright.*
I wish for no one to take advantage of me,
To not worry and to be carefree.
I wish for my best friend to come back to France,
And for her parents to no longer say that she can’t.
I wish for a girl, the best luck with him,
I hope that their love will never be grim.
I wish for everyone to become what they will
And to live their life with excitement and thrill.

However, that’s a lot of wishes, you see,
If I can have only one, make everyone free.

*This is in reference to my poem "Personal".

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  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    i gave you a 5 because your poem is so refreshingly original!! great job!! awesome flow!

    love,
    abcede ^,^

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is amazing!! Really nice, and it makes a lot of sense, and it runz really smoothly...keep on writing and take care...definetely a 5/5!! and i seen that you mentioned my name on ur one poem thing...anytime hun! as long as it makes ya feel better :)..cya
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 19 years ago

    by nanz

    i love this poem! i want a star now! hope ur friend gets to come back to france...i hope u get everything you wished for...
    luv nanz

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    your on a roll girl, great work. i love your new direction so far, but dont give up on your old ones either. they are great too. yor a great girl. keep up the great work. never give up on anything

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Zoe as always your excellent writing has touched my heart once again... this was the sweetest poem and says so much.. keep up your excellent work and may you have everything you dream of. 555
    Jennifer.