Numb

by Aidyn   Mar 18, 2005


Look to your left
Look to your right
Everyone must be
Out of sight

Impending darkness
Gentle cloth
Tender flexions
Strangling soft

Alone, no one
Unaware
Without feeling
Without care

Deafly screaming
Blindly seething
Wounds and sores
Don't stop bleeding

Feelings gently
Welling up
Fiercely desperate
Not enough

Writhing, fighting
For tempting freedom
Tearing, clawing
Completely numb

I watch this, silent
Stretch my fingers
They reach out
Does hope still linger?

Though you can interpret this how you want, the main character (as shown in the last stanza, is not the one suffering, but is watching others suffer).

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  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    WOW! Great job, you have a-ma-zing talent. Keep up it, hun!

    LOVE
    Lolli

  • 19 years ago

    by ~Amy~

    -------------------- (speachless)
    This is SO moving!

  • 19 years ago

    by Krystle

    Hey, I really like this one man. Good job, very powerful regardless of the simplicity. And when I feel up to writing again...I'll write. For now....I just want to ignore the world. If you feel like talking, just call me. You can get my number from Jenn. Anyways...excellent work, keep it up!