The Reaper

by SmileeItsBritt   Mar 21, 2005


The scars on my arm
Aren't as deep as the ones in my heart
That's like a dagger straight through
It's been so ripped apart
The girl you once knew
The demons took her away
You can't get her back
In hell's where she'll stay
They took her young soul
And ripped her to shreds
She's now so empty inside
As empty as death
When you look in her eyes
They're so icy, so cold
No warmth in her heart
Her soul has been sold
She'll never return
Her pains got too tight a grasp
After her suicide she'll be remembered
As just a part of the past
Deaths bearing her corner
The chains are all locked
She can't break free
How to try, she's forgot
The devil took her angels
That dried the tears she cried
Now she cries tears of blood
As they lay roses by her side

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  • 19 years ago

    by miss scooby

    WOW...this was really sad. gave me shivers. and I appreciate the honesty in the comment you provided to me. Yes there are different types of pain but i wasnt not stipluating them as all one..I was comparing...the pain the less fortunate feel to the "pain" {hense my quotations} a lot of us have such as warm meals, cable, the internet, an education etc etc. the word pain in my poem is not actually the meaning of the word itself...its a sybolic word for many things we take for granted.

    TO YOUR POEM;
    I enjoyed very much so, it was really sad and your way of words it quite capturing...very impressive and i think i am going to have to stick yah on my favorites...if yah dont mind that is.
    take care 5/5
    Scooby

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    thats so sad. but very well done. 5/5
    ~Freak~

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    Very profound poem I really did love it I gave it a 5 congrads!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    Brilliant Title, I Don't Usualy Like Dark Poems But I Loved This One 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A VERY WELL WRITTEN DARK POEM

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