Godsend

by Unseen Exposure   Mar 23, 2005


Don't want to eat
Can't manage to sleep
Shut eye would do me well
Feelings so intence
Emotions in tact
I stumbled and then I fell

Into brick walls
And valleys of death
I make the journey alone
With eyes of hate
And misguided trust
With blood of softened stone

Running from the past
Hiding from the pain
But there's no place to go
I'll make it to the end
With a sealed fate
Tied up with a red bow

I'll breathe easier knowing
That the end is near
Just around the bend
Winding roads
And broken bones
Ironic, this is my Godsend.

- its confusing

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  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I liked how you jumbled the piece into this clash of words that symbolised the state of mind and pain.
    I loved these lines,
    "And misguided trust
    With blood of softened stone"
    And I think the last line was ironic and beautifully concluded the piece.

    Well done

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Astonishing. Keep writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Missing Them Already*~

    Oooo...I love it!! Its really good hun. I didn't find it too confusing. Through the whole thing I felt I could relate to it!! Keep it up babe...you're one of a kind!! :)
    Love you
    Sammy

  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    amazing work as always, seriously, never stop writing, this stuff just rocks.

    emma x

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