Faithless-Father.

by ElegantlyWasted   Mar 23, 2005


My face once more shaded,
With colors - black and blue
People don't bother asking,
They know that it was you.

And i just keep on walking,
When someone talks to me
"Why don't you just move away"
But no one will ever see.

I don't want to be the loser,
In this game anymore
I have had enough;
Of being knocked to the floor.

I don't care what he says -
Or how tough he wants to be,
He will not stop me succeeding,
And living my life, for me!

He can chuck material things,
Aim nasty words at my heart
Stab knives into my back -
But i will not be torn apart!

Goodbye faithless-father.

+This is sh!t ... Excuse its muddled-ness. It is not my best.+

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  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Whassup, GRRL?!?!?! :) I decided tp read this one today. You see I would be going through the same situation if certain things hadn't happened. I hope this isn't true...? If so, GET AWAY AS FAST AS YOU CAN CUZ YOU DON'T DESERVE THAT BULL BY THE WAY THIS IS NOT $4!+ YOU ARE NOT $4!+ THIS IS SOME GOOD STUFF!!! Remember that I luv you you are a very sweet person don't let anyone drag down your self-confidence and self-esteem. Thank you for the feedback! PEACE & LUV ALWAYS & 4EVA

  • 19 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    You go girl!!!!!Haha It's really good!!!! I loved it

    Chris
    *Hey you should come check out my new one...I'd be honored*

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    well you got a 5/5 from me so you must be doing something right, this is no shit girl. and if it is then it's good shit! some of the best shit i have ever read. great poem, take care,

    PLP ~lil slam~ lots of hugs~

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Hehe, it's still a really good poem. I'm glad you finally see that you're too good and strong to be knoecked down by those not even worthy of your presence.
    Much love,
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I won't call it shit, not even close...It's a really touching poem and I love it!!! I know the pain you are going through!!! Keep your head up high girl, you will make it!!!

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