Questions of doubt

by Hurtingsoul   Mar 23, 2005


Why do i feel so much pain?
why am i crying from what my heart contains?
why is everyone leaving me to drown in a drain?
...cause pain is what my life gave

Who is there to heel my wounds?
who is there to show me unlimited bounds?
who will not treat me like a freakin hound?
...no one except the one who digs my grave

Is there anyone out there to save me?
is this going to end,this hurt that you see?
is someone going to break me free?
...no everyone will tare you apart to pieces

Does anyone care about my cuts that scarred?
does anyone look at my sleeves from afar?
does anyone even notice my pain from my heart of tar?
...no one does they just keep teasing.....................

just some questions i had in my head*
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oh and i tried something knew i hope you noticed**

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Very well written, you're getting much better =) keep it up!

    With love
    Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    Good poem, but I am honestly very tired of reading poems with such themes. Don't take that as criticizm though, because it ain't. It's just me.

    Your poem is really good

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! questions that float in everyone's minds are good to write down like this! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    good poem

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    ~*~oh wow,i like this poem, good job, keep up the good writing~*~