Heaven or Hell

by The Flame Within   Mar 23, 2005


What we gain
what we lost
he still feels pain
on the cross

why do we lack in love
why do we sin to much
it comes from above
my heart on a crutch

pain will always stay
I'm not sure why
i feel it everyday
whenever i cry

its not from scars
all these new tears
feeling trapped behind bars
for so many years

when my pains goes away
your the first i tell
the choice everyday
either Heaven or Hell

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  • 20 years ago

    by Ally xo

    hey thanks for awnsering me i was kinda worried lol anyway wow u got another reward GuD WorK u deserve it anyways bye bye u did really nice on this one

  • 20 years ago

    by Donna

    Wow, that touched my heart and made me truely think of what jesus did for me. Awesome god gave you a gift. Your using it.
    Donna
    p.s. what an inspiration

  • 20 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Wow!! Nick, that was...cold! It even depressed me!! But it was admirable nonetheless!! lol. Loved it bunches!!

    I hope you don't have scars. Did you break the promise? lol (Not much of a promise anymore is it?)

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