Crimson wave

by Austin   Mar 24, 2005


A summer flooded with red
And the nights glowing bright
Sounds of your lies
Can still be heard on the waves

The night you threw yourself
Threw yourself to the tide
Staining the water
Crimson with your lies

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  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    oh, wow, i really liked this one.......its short, but very good, most of my poems are short too......i find it difficult to write long ones lol......anyways, great write, keep it up hun =).......**hugs**.......laterzzz

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    Wow, GREAT!! =) 5 for this one... hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    Amazing poem, short but very effective....loved it.....

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by Donna

    Wow, very good. Very interesting !!!!!! Loved it
    DONNA