Help her

by broken angel   Mar 25, 2005


A lonely girl hides in the dark
but only I can hear her cry
She's sick of always answering
all their questions to why

Her wrists are cut and bleeding
Her eyes are cold and gray
I wish that I could help her
I wish there was something I could say

I lean in close to help her
I have to save her fast
I reach my hand out to touch her
But my hand is stopped by glass

I know I have to save her
But this is my worst fear
Instead of touching a lonely girl
My fingers just streak a mirror

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  • 16 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Great final line- wasn't expecting it. great work x

  • 18 years ago

    by penny

    beauifuly written - keep up the gd work ###

  • 18 years ago

    by creasy

    this.....great.....excellent....speechless....

  • This poem is so amazing. I love the ending, brillaint idea. It's also kind os sad as well, I know the feeling the person in this poem has. It really is just a brillaint piece of work
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Sammy

    same as the others...awsome
    luv yas
    sammy