Water-tower

by Dante   Mar 25, 2005


My water-tower was blown up,
at the top
of the hill near my house...
I wonder
who it was...

In the middle of that tower pendulum hanged
and again my thoughts are going to that bang

That tower was forsaken for a long time
not only in my mind,
And came back to my thoughts when I saw
how it died, I didn't cry...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Very unique. I would take out the second verse though, it just seems odd and does not fit in. I think the poem would be more powerful without it.

    --Sher

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    Creative but I found it a little confusing its well written!

    take care

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