A little tear

by Phoenix   Mar 25, 2005


I watched it slip away today
I promised it wouldn't get out.
I said over and over,this one is staying.
But I opened my eyes and i had no control,my tear escaped and the rest followed.

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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    i agree, it was short but great...loved it!! keep it up!! stay strong!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Awe, short but full of emotion, i'm sorry for the loss....Stay strong!

    With love,
    Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    hey wow, that's so short and sweet, awesome!

    emmax

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