At Least Your Happy

by Carmen   Mar 25, 2005


You have broken my heart,
Stabbing threw it like a dart,
Causing a lot of hurt and pain,
Making everything bad and nothing to gain.

Now I see you with a new girl,
Will I ever get a whirl?
You think she's so pretty,
So intelligent and witty,
But does she really love you?
I wish you knew the truth like I do.

I see you smile,
And I hope it lasts for a while,
But what'd I'd really like to see,
Is you being happy, with me.

I'm glad your in love,
In which she's your dove.
I'm glad you have fun,
And I notice she's your sun.
Everything you do is revolved,
Revolved around her, causing me pain, wishing it to be solved.

When I sit and wonder,
Think and ponder,
It is all so very sappy,
But at least your happy.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Jamie

    I like this but you definatly need to work on vocab... rhyming me and see and you and do can only be used so many times

  • 20 years ago

    by natalie

    hey i liked the poem and wwhat it said, but the rhyme did feel a little forced. well done tho :)

  • 20 years ago

    by tabithaa

    good...

  • 20 years ago

    by Emily

    It was a great and meanigful poem, but the rhyming was a little shaky.

  • 20 years ago

    by Robert

    This was ok but it left me wondering, Why you would ever write this and what were you really telling the boy. Yes he is happy but what effect does it have to you. Should he even care these are the answers I was really waiting for Oh well nice try.

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