I can't breathe

by Lost Girl   Mar 27, 2005


*I found this in my note book, it was in my hand writing but I can’t remember writing it, I think I did it in the middle of the night in the middle of a dream, but I thought I would put it up here anyway.*

I can’t breathe
So far down
Underneath green seas
I’m drowning
In your love

I can’t breathe
Real deep down
Falling with such ease
I’m dying
So lonely

I can’t breathe
Without you
But when you are here
I start to cry
These tears

I can’t breathe
By myself
Drowning is so near
Can’t see
Wont fight

I can’t breathe
No not here
Tear my flesh apart
Far below
Blue skies

I can’t breathe
Blood stops
Flowing to my heart
One mile
From you

I can’t breathe
Instead I
Try to fly
But fall further into pain
I’ve all but
Given up

I can’t breathe
I let go
Hallucinate
I know that I’m insane
So from here
I bid you good-night

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  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    oh wow, i really liked it......keep it up =)

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    Ya I thik I did, I sometimes do that, wake up in the night and just right random stuff!

  • 19 years ago

    by MariiaShan

    Nice poem Did you actually write it though?