Wont bring you back

by Lost Girl   Oct 25, 2005


Take my words and polish them until they shine
Smarten and perfect them until they are no longer mine
Make them heavenly and sacred to all that wish to hear
But I know even that wont bring you back my dear

And I know you will soon be home, only a few more days
Looking at my pictures of you as each day fades away
All the memories flood back but still I’m left alone
I’m lying in my own bed but this place isnt my home

Don’t want to see you crying, but I’ll help you clean up the mess
I want to see you smile everyday, always feeling your best
And I want to hold your hand through the thick and thin
I will cleanse your painful thoughts and keep you free from sin

So by the stream of moon light that streams through my glass
I sit and silently whisper of the times of our past
Reminiscing over happy pictures in the park, just us two
Waiting to see you again, to tell you how much I love you

*first poem in ages, wish I could write something I actually liked, anyway tell me what you think*

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  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    I liked it
    it was great
    keep wrighting you are a great writer and keep up all your hard work

    never stop wrightin

    from lana

  • 18 years ago

    by Graham

    Why was I such a knob?

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    I love you, so sorry I am not back quicker than I thought I would be, I hate the fact i am still away, I love you, with all my heart and soul

  • 18 years ago

    by Roulin

    Hey Black, Its pretty good, I agree with the other person you've written better but haven't we all?

    Luv Scarlet xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    Hey, this wasn't one of your best poems but it was still really good. It had a really strong ending that totally captured me. The middle gets a lil confusing but I think it wraps it up nicely at the end. Well keep up the good work. 5/5