Dagger of love

by Lil Luce   Mar 27, 2005


**please comment!!!thanks***

The sun clambers up the indistinct hillside,
as the harsh rays infiltrate his dreams.
Invading the place where he has no need to hide,
where no one need hear his screams.

As the sun dawns for yet another day,
one that's wrapped in hurt and pain.
The silent anguish he doesn't portray,
his dignity he tries to maintain.

Everyday his heart breaks a little more,
as she wanders through his life.
His heart is trapped like a prisoner of war,
as she sharpens the butcher knife.

She cant see the sorrow she causes,
as she callously knocks him back.
With her words like bullets she withdraws,
the knife ready for the attack.

She doesn't see the love he feels,
just pities the guy in the glasses.
She doesn't know hes head over heels,
in love every time that she passes.

So every time she ignores his pleading,
the knife digs a little deeper.
His heart screams out, dying, bleeding,
as she cant see past his exterior.

So as night falls and the moon creeps out,
to his silent bed he retires.
He takes the dagger and pulls it out,
of his heart thats already expired.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    That was one of my favourite poems that you have written......it was so good!

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    Everyday his heart breaks a little more,
    as she wanders through his life.
    His heart is trapped like a prisoner of war,
    as she sharpens the butcher knife

    wow my favourite past of the poem although all of it was really well written.

    keep writing u have alot of talent !

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    To tell the truth I wasn't expecting much, but then I as I read my excitement grew. I was just waiting for you to write something stupid, but it never came. I loved the way you put this together.

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    very good... 5/5! keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by lifes big mistake

    very good but also sad
    please comment on mine thanks lilkit