This is your creepest one by far.I think you need help david.

wow... a truly moving piece. absolutely beautifully written!! im really sorry your cousin took his life. you are def one of my favorite poets on this site. keep up the great work and take care.
Ariane
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wow...very deep and strongly written, i love it!

I loved it! It had alot of emotion in it.. Very nicely done...

*> : PainOfOne

Wow I'm so impressed! so sorry about your cousin and I really don't think you need help like someone stated before, minds need to be wide ranged in writing ... great job =) 5

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig

another awesome awesome poem! a 5/5

wow beautifully written even though its sad and ashame that it was true! well done anyways ur cousin would have been proud! hope u comment on some of my work
take care
xxxLoUxxx

that was an amazing poem...i can relate to some of it...it makes my poems seem really crappy...thanks(non sarcastic)

whoa.. thats really really sad...
5/5 and im sure he would appreciate it

That was a bit freaky! BUt it was good. One suggestion though. In some parts the two lines rhyme, in other parts they almost rhyme but not totally, so if you'd change that then it would help. Otherwise I enjoyed it, it was definitly scary....lol
Satuxxa

thats sad i'm sorry a beautiful poem though keep writing i really like yours

One very small clean-up issue...."I have ended my problems and gotten rid of my fear,j" I would assume you don't want that "j" in there? Other than that, it was very well written. The rhyming scheme almost seems to be off but it never affects the flow or any of the normal symptoms. Very well done.

wow, 5 stars for this one.. great poem... please check out my poem "My dad: dead and gone forever" thanks a lot.. hugs from me

This poem is really good and has sooo much meaning in it. i loved it. Great job. -*I am so dearly sorry for your loss*

Love alwayz,
Katie Schettler

Wow...that write was very moving. I really liked it...it kept my grip the whole way. very expressive and emotional. it was awesome. xxx

Again may i say i love your poems i just love that suicidal(dont know if spelled right) mind of yours

That was certainly interesting...dark, that's for sure. Has a good rhyming scheme...it's a little too creepy for me to like it, but you did a pretty amazing job with it.

xxx

holy shit... thats some strong writing right there.. youve definitely got talent tho, i gotta give you taht... if you could check out some of mine at some point down the road..
thanks
amanda