by Jessica Mar 28, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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You are the sunshine in my sky, |
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I think the last stanza really wrapped it all up. Thanks for using my advice it makes me feel smart :P |
by Amanda Bee
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Nice job:) |
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i like it and i like your rhyme scheme it keeps people interested for longer and makes them wanting more mayb thats why it seems unfinished to some people but i think ur poems are all fab so keep it up! xxx |
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Nice.. but.. I feel there needs more. Don't get me wrong.. short poems are nice but this one sounds incomplete. |