You are.............

by Jessica   Mar 28, 2005


You are the sunshine in my sky,
You are my reason not to cry,
Your face guides my thoughts to sleep,
You are the reason my love is so deep.

You are the breath that keeps me strong,
You are the voice that says hold on,
You are the song that keeps me singing,
You are the force that keeps me winning.

You are the touch that erases pain,
You are the melody that keeps me sane,
You are my crutches when my legs give out,
You are the love that shows no doubt.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    I think the last stanza really wrapped it all up. Thanks for using my advice it makes me feel smart :P
    Good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Nice job:)

  • 19 years ago

    by hannah morgan

    i like it and i like your rhyme scheme it keeps people interested for longer and makes them wanting more mayb thats why it seems unfinished to some people but i think ur poems are all fab so keep it up! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Nice.. but.. I feel there needs more. Don't get me wrong.. short poems are nice but this one sounds incomplete.

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