nicely worded and thought out Daniel - well done xx

not to bad, great attempt, keep writing, you have potental babe!

it's odd how love and hate are so closely related eh?

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig

i know that feeling its a good poem

great poem! i love it! really sweet and easy to relate to! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

I liked it, i have been there I made that love my best friend. We are a lot closer now.

cute poem, keep it up!! :)

Oh man I am sorry to hear about this...love sucks sometimes, but hang in there and keep smiling! makes you feel somewhat better! Like the way you wrote this! It was different but very good!
-Krissey

P.S could you please read "two voices unheard"

Ive noticed that all your poetry is in the same layout, well the ones ive noticed anyway. why dont you try an "abab" style? of aabb, in structured stanzas? i think it may suit your writing?
Take care
Geo
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Yes, really strange how we can hate and love a person all at the same time:)

I enjoyed reading your poem, you worded your feelings well.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid